Is this page too hard to follow? I want to play with the panel format more as the chapter goes on, but I don't want it to get confusing.
(Another new character reveal on the next page!!)
By the way, here's a not-so-fun fact: Today I spent 6 hours just sketching the rough of a page before even scanning it in! It isn't even a complicated page! It's just been a tough day! HOPEFULLY BY THE TIME YOU'RE READING THIS THAT PAGE WILL BE DONE ALREADY!
Something makes me want to believe Speedy will find a date of his own, but I don't think that will happen at a ball where everyone is required to not be single. Well, Moonlight and Gell didn't bring real dates, so there's a chance it could happen in this chapter if at all. Also, I didn't address this before, but REALLY Frisky?! Not only did requiring dates for the ball make Speedy feel lonely and not want to go, because he wasn't allowed to anyway, but you did it so you could ship your friends and make bets about them?!
Missing a period in panel one after nothing. To me at least this page isn't hard to follow. Excellent work. Even if it took long, it turned out great! Poor Speedy!
(Another new character reveal on the next page!!)
By the way, here's a not-so-fun fact: Today I spent 6 hours just sketching the rough of a page before even scanning it in! It isn't even a complicated page! It's just been a tough day! HOPEFULLY BY THE TIME YOU'RE READING THIS THAT PAGE WILL BE DONE ALREADY!